[[jusTforyoU]] ++ r u e p a w;&&♥

[[:; [h] e a r t ::♥]]

little miss

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ha. you wish.

*okay, so i'm far from perfect, but everyone's got flaws, right?

*as you can see, i'm not like all the other little blue-eyed sweet little kitties out there. i actually have a personality.

*no, i'm not mean. i just speak my mind. and since when is that a bad thing? you can't go on in life sugar coating everything.

*even if i do seem a bit intimidating, i am a nice cat, okay?


*at 9 moons old, i'm an apprentice, and even though i'm a great hunter (not to brag), i could use some work on my fighting skills.

*and here comes the little bit of fairytale:

*yes, behind all that tough exterior, i have a soft spot in my heart for that one special tom. ew.

*but yes, i do like sorrelpaw. i mean, he's just so calm all the time, and he doesn't like me just because i'm pretty. like all the toms who've ever liked me.

*in fact, he doesn't even like me at all.

*anyway, like i said, i am pretty good looking. it's not that i'm vain, i'm just confident and cat's have said i was pretty before.

#snow white fur, blue eyes the color of the river in newleaf, the whole shebang.

#small, lithe figure, dainty paws, and a graceful tail that i use to gesture when i talk.

#and the little things, like my well-sculpted facial features, my pale rosy pink nose, and elegant ears. all the things that prompt other felines to call me pretty.

&&; i could look at the clouds all day.

&&; sometimes i find the simplest things amazing.

&&; i usually notice small things that most cats don't.

&&; i love the rain.

[[r u e p a w]]
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*Ruepaw and Sorrelpaw are having sort of a little mini-plot right now. Sorrelpaw is what most people would call 'devoid of emotion', and only focuses on training to become a warrior. And Ruepaw likes him. And so on...
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[frosty ♥]

We're taking a step up when doing profiles. <3
Okay, here are the things you need to edit for a spellcheck:

(Anything in bold needs modifying. )

*as you can see, i'm not like all the other little blue-eyed sweet little kitties out ther. i actually have a personality.

*at 9 moons old, i'm an apprentice, and even though i'm a great gunter (not to brag), i could use some work on my fighting skills

*an here comes the little bit of fairytale:

*anyway, like i said, i am pretty good looking. it'ds not that i'm vain, i'm just confident and cat's have said i was pretty before.

&&; i susually notice small things that most cats don't.

#and the little things, like my well-sculpted facual features, my pale rosy pink nose, and elegant ears. all the things that prompt other felines to call me pretty

And lastly, double check to make sure you have a period on the end of each sentence. Spell-check wise, you should be perfect, Heart. ♥♥

*but yes, i do like sorrelpaw. i mean, he's just so calm all the time, and he doesn't like me just because i'm pretty. like all the toms who've ever liked me.

Did you get permission for the crush from Blackie before she left? Or are you going to do so when she comes back? I can accept for now, but Ruepaw will have to have no romantic/affectionate/crushing thoughts and or actions on Sorrelpaw until permission is granted. (:

wavering.

- frosty ♥

[[:; [h] e a r t ::♥]]

Yep, of course I asked Blackie. It's or little mini plot. :]

And sorry about the typos. I always do that xD.

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[frosty ♥]

Mini plot; great! I'd suggest adding that near the bottom of her profile with a little detail. That way, other people know not to butt in on the wrong time. xD

And it's fine, just add and modify then she'll be accepted.

- frosty ♥