Blazepelt

[Stormy]

Name: Blazepelt
Age: 20 Moons Old
Gender: Tom
Rank: Warrior
Apprentice: None at the moment.
Allegiance: EarthClan
Appearance: Blazing Orange Tabby coat. Amber/yellowish eyes. White spot on chest. Muscular.
Physical Condition: Healthy
Personality: Proud, fierce and lives strictly by the Warrior Code. His favourite thing to do is hunt, and he prides himself with being great at it. Devoted to his clan and would give his life to save a cat or protect his clan. On the bad side, he has a temper and depending on the subject can be easily angered.
Crush/Mate: Open.
Kin: None at the moment.

Frosty sent me an invite to here on neopets... I have no idea if I am doing this right, sorry.

[>>BLACKiE! ]}]

Haha, that's all right. ^^ What I'm going to do is critique your profile a little [don't take any offense at anything I say ^^;].

It's a good start. :] What I'd like to see, however, is a little more about about your cat's appearance: he has a blazing orange tabby coat, but how thick is this coat? Is it all just one shade of orange? What type of build does he have [big/small/medium/etc]? What type of build is this good for: running, jumping, etc.?

Good start again with the personality; if I could maybe see a little more, though? ^^ Like, how do others see him as well, etc etc etc.?

Also, a quick role play sample would be nice. ^^

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